And just when I thought nobody could ever pass through this impenetrable fortress,
He was like a wand spell
that created magic beyond my imagination
While every inch of my skin screamed in pain, he always stood there
with his arms opened, to let me crash in
like waves crashing into the shore
From the depth of my belly, to the tips of my finger, when it was all sadness,
gleam of his iris never failed to rock me
to drown into a happiness, so sweet
that it could even engulf me
When darkness clogged my throat
He was like the light through the tunnel
who kissed the scars even beyond my skin,
making me feel like home was not just a place but, time
In the middle of sleepless nights, when all the thoughts would dance in my head
his words strummed across my soul
like he was playing the slowest love song
in the world, that only we could hear
When it all seemed dreary and I’d wrapped up myself with briars and barbed wires
He unraveled through all the knots, unleashed layers, making me forget if our bodies existed
like our souls together were nothing
but an entangled mass of love
And just when I thought that bitterness was the answer to life, that being uptight and untrusting was a viable strategy to be alive in this cynical world,
He was like a lantern in a lifeboat
like a hope in human form,
cause his love is a therapy
very like a sunray falling on a hoarfrost leaf.
Hey ! this one is really nice….. 🙂
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this filled me with so much happiness, I can not describe in words.
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Beautifully drafted!
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Thankyou! 🙂
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Splendid!!
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Thankyou! 🙂
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My pleasure!! Wish you a wonderful day!!💕💕💕
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Love, always heals.
Beautiful!!❤
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Yes,it does! 🙂
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Beautiful ❤️
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This is beautiful!💙
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Thank you Susi! 😊
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Wonderful writing. You rise such deep emotions with amazing talent.
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Thankyou so much Lucia! 🙂
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Wonderful piece of writing
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Thank you! 😊
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I love this .
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Happy to hear that! 🙂
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xx Such gorgeous imagery. Truly x
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Beautiful and mesmerizing!
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Thankyou! 🙂
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Good one
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I never thought of love in such a way until I read your poem 🙂
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Thankyou soo much! ❤
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🙂
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Very beautiful and spellbound !
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Thankyouu! 😊
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Very nice
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Loved this one most…’home was not just a place but, time’. Somehow it resonated with my own feelings. Love your poetry. Following you in the hope of reading more from you.
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Very nice…I love your timing and phrasing 🙂
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Thanks Carol! 😊
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I really like the triumph of love over cynicism in your poem. Very lovely.
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Thankyou! 🌸
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You brought tears to my eyes. I love, love, LOVE this. Beyond beautiful. Thank You. 🙂
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I’m touched.
Thank you❤
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